Light is behind the clouds
I see over the horizen,
up above the
paved hills.
After walking
for what feels like forever,
I slow down than sit
on the rocky concrete road.
Sweat dripping down me,
I am hot and sweaty
as the air is dry.
My mouth is parched,
like it's own desert.
The sun's hot breath constantly on my back
I eventually stand up,
the wind whipping my long air into my face.
The kind of wind that blows around hot air
and makes dust dance.
Slowly I walk,
each step more painful than the last.
I am no closer to the small town
than when I began walking
this morning.
Then the sun seems to have blown out
darkness floods the sky as
the clouds roll in.
The few trees sway under a swollen sky.
Soon I start to run
as the grey clouds burst
and I see
silver trinkets of rain
They soak my hair and my clothes.
I feel them run down my face
making my body glisten
and I cry out in joy
when I run far enough to reach
the town I've been walking to.
~
In English we're reading a book called Out of the Dust. I read it when I was in elementary school and I highly recommended it. Anyway, it's told through a narrative poem. I've decided to try to write some kind of narrative poem.
I was thinking about narrative poems yesterday and boom- here it is on your blog!
ReplyDeleteThere are several other books written in narrative poem- Love That Dog by Sharon Creech, and one that rhymes called Zorgamazoo, but I forget who wrote that.
I have not read out of the dust before, but I saw a copy on my shelf. Off I go on a quest for the fabled book "out of the dust"
*mounts horse and gallops bravely away*
Gwen
Oooh! New books for Emily! :D
Delete*Mounts horse and gallops bravely away*
~Emily
Oh, and I read My name is Mina and I LOVED it!
OH MY GOODNESS I READ OUT OF THE DUST WHEN I WAS IN FOURTH GRADE AND I LOVED IT SO MUUUUUUCH.
ReplyDeleteSome lovely imagery in that little piece!
- Ellie
Out of the dust was quite the amazing book, but I don't know why we have to read it in middle school.
DeleteThank you Ellie!
~Emily