Reflections~ (A poem part1)

3.19.2015

We were reflections
of people
of faces
of ideas
Likeness held us together
thought differences would
tear 
us apart 

No one is 
Unique.
Everyone is 
uniform

We were like mass producted
products.
Each one recopied
created over multiple times.

Nothing to look at
until 
She 
came.

~
.....
Cliff Hanger!
Mainly because I need to think about this 'she' character.
I hope you liked the poem.
Emily

 

4 comments:

  1. Ugh, I love the picture! And the first four lines are lovely. :)

    - Ellie

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  2. We are reflections, aren't we? All copying someone else, slight variations of the same thing. In the very literal sense, this has to do with the Social Survival Mammoth again.
    But this is your story. So It's probably not the mammoth.
    Right now Im thinking Utopian Society, "She" is the person who comes and changes it all, anarchy spreads due to differences, But "She" figures it all out in the end.
    Predicting. Yes. I foresee the future. XD nope.
    Yes, I did like it.
    Gwen

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    1. Thanks Gwen!
      When I wrote this poem I first thought utopia, but then I saw some girls trying to be popular and I realized it has a iteral sense too.
      ~Emily

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