(Using the 1st picture)
Sighing I glance around my room. Same as always; flowers hanging around everywhere, including in my hair. Mostly wild flowers that grew up the sides of the castle tower I was locked into.Still wearing my, white, light night gown, I walked to the only window in the tower. Light filled every space in the room. The sun was still rising and I could see it perfectly. Resting my hands on the window's edge, I sighed.
"Allegro!" My mother barked awakening from my fantasy of leaving this tower. "Enough dilly dallying. Things need to be done. Cleaning, laundry..."
Slowly my mind began to wander and her voice faded out as she listed my endless chores. I tried to look focused, but all I could think of is how I wish I was more like my name, Allegro. I'm supposed to be lively, but in this tower... I never do anything but complete chores and sit around.
"Do you understand?" Mother asked with a raised eybrow, suddenly pulling me back into reality.
"Yes mother," I replied before reaching for the broom. I turned around for no longer than a minute before Mother dispersed.
Once again I sighed.
Living in this cold, stone tower was boring. And lonely.
I had no choice but to begin cleaning up; Mother would be back at sunset to judge my work.
~
I'm not gonna lie:
I had trouble writing this.
Whenever I started, I hated what I wrote (too borring to long, not enough dialogue, poor characters...) but I finally gave up.
So I wrote.
And I didn't edit,
only wrote. And now I have this.
(I think I did pretty well....)
I like it! Team Hobbit?
ReplyDelete<3Bella
Thanks Bella!
DeleteNope. I wish tho, cuz your team is kicking my team's butt xD
I see an enemy in my presence! XD I'm just kidding. It is sad that you aren't on the same team though.
Delete<3Bella
Great job Emily! And don't worry, Team Hippogriff is going to win this thing! We can do it! I'm drawing my character for the next challenge, just for the extra 5 points.
DeleteThanks Tenley!
DeleteMe too! I don't think my drawing is that good, but if it gets us five extra points....
I'm excited to see your character design! I've already done mine, I just haven't posted it. I really like the way mine turned out! I LOVE designing characters!
DeleteNope, Team Hobbit is going to win! :)
Delete<3Bella
You did do very well! Congrats! You are an awesome writer! :)
ReplyDeleteAllie D.
www.spreadingmyjoy.blogspot.com
Thanks Allie!
DeleteAH I LOVE THIS AND NOW I WANT MORE!!!!
ReplyDeletefairytales have always fascinated me and this was so well executed.
can't even handle your writing right now <3 XD
Thanks Olivia!
Delete<3
I love Allegro. She seems like an awesome character!
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's nice to just write and write and not worry about whether or not it will turn out good. I know how horrible it can feel when you just can't write something you think is good.
- Ellie
Thanks Ellie!
DeleteYeah it kinda sucks...
I like it! Your description of Allegro was really good!:) I know how it feels to think your work just stinks! Your story was great though!:D
ReplyDelete-Emma-
Thanks!
DeleteHey I'm hosting a blog chain on my blog, it'll be great if you can participate (no pressure, though). Here's a link: http://theparadoxicanomaly.blogspot.in/2015/08/the-paradoxic-anomaly-blog-chain.html
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